Tuesday, October 27, 2009

Peer Edit

1. The 2,800-square-foot, four-bedroom house will be built on a concrete foundation. (passive)

2. Eastern Washington could be a renewable energy leader if people understood the benefits, said Carlton, owner of Palouse Synergy Systems.

3. “I got a double with a full bath,” said John Gardner, WSU vice president of economic development and global engagement. “I lived in Gannon-Golds for two years, and then I switched over here—[this is a] huge difference!”

4. PCEI is offering workshops to teach locals to value and know how to use sustainable techniques, she said.

5. “The new dorm is likely to receive the silver rating,” Gardner said.

there needs to be something between here

"Everything we do has a consequence,” Englund said about sustainability methods, consumption, and ecological footprints. “We just have to be aware [of] the butterfly effect.”

6. He also raises money for student scholarships.

7. She said she has been ostracized in her dorm, and, she might move to another hall. (passive)

8. Though helping to improve Pullman’s atmosphere, SEL does not make Pullman immune from the recession, Sherman said.

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